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Objects in the Mirror by *dmorse523:icondmorse523:





The scale of these things is so often misleading.
The story’s much bigger than the words you are reading.

Objects in mirrors may soon disappear
But the problem gets larger as the subject gets near.

From the air they seem tiny, bobbing heads in the water,
Great sperm whales sleep upright, awaiting their slaughter.

At the hands of grown men in their tiny toy tankers,
That once sailed in their bathtubs, using bubbles for anchors

In the grand scheme of physics’ mathematics ballet,
Our big world‘s a needle in the infinite hay.

Run the sand through your fingers as you lay by the ocean,
And nod drugged by the sea’s narcotic wave motion.

Are we more than electrons and protons bound tightly together?
Just pull them apart and the answers forever.

The microscope’s eye reveals realms of the hidden,
Lost crystalline worlds, where your gaze is forbidden.

So consider your place and remember the scale
Of these problems and pleasures, of the trials and travails.

In the grand scheme they’re fleeting, so don’t hold on to pain
Let it pass like dead leaves carried off by the rain.

Back down onto the beach, onward through to the sea
Shake it off like a dog, like a man, like a flea.

The weight of these things is so often misleading.
Like the pixels or ink on this page that you’re reading.

From nothing comes something and then nothing again,
We were small and grew bigger, back to little and then,

Back to nothing or something or nothing again...
©2009 *dmorse523
:icondmorse523:

Author's Comments

just thinking about how sperm whales sleep upright and how mirrors can deceive (you know, the usual stuff....) :-)

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:iconohno-moment:
very zen

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"I have only three things to teach: simplicity, patience, and compassion. These three are your greatest treasures." - Lao Tzu
:iconvideotaped:
That's kind of intense XD
The mirrors deceiving is a bit standard, but sperm whales? I've gotta give you credit for that one :D
Nice job with the rhyme too!

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to avoid criticism,
do nothing,
say nothing,
be nothing.

personally, i'd rather be someone than no one.

wouldn't you?
:icondmorse523:
Why thank you!

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"Somewhere a mountain is moving. I'm afraid it's moving without me..."
:icondmorse523:
yes no maybe ;-)

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"Somewhere a mountain is moving. I'm afraid it's moving without me..."
:iconintergrativeone:
very substantial thoughts! I enjoyed this... Cheers Daniel!

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always lead~~~never follow~~~
:icondecarabia69:
I don't normally go for poetry that rhymes, but this was delightful. I also didn't know that sperm whales sleep upright.

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You ain't so bad your self.
I see a resemblace of H.R. Giger as well as R.S Connett
Peter S Sibrin
:icondmorse523:
Hey there, thanks!!!

Yes, indeed they do (i learned this fun factoid while watching a National Geographic special about a beached sperm whale that actually spontaneously combusted on the back of a flatbed truck in Taiwan, while en route to a university museum for necropsy)

It was an enormous blast, equivalent to 4 sticks of TNT and it spattered enormous chunks of bloody, stinky whale intestines over a whole city block!

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"Somewhere a mountain is moving. I'm afraid it's moving without me..."
:iconblisterine66:
touche'

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Either you think, or else others have to think for you.
:icondruid69:
Bravo!

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"Up is a direction diametrically opposed to down" ~druid69

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